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Showing posts with label Commentary. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Commentary. Show all posts
Saturday, August 21, 2010

With the latest season of the Clone Wars approaching release and gaining hype, I decided that perhaps now is the best time to offer my own in depth commentary on this series. Ill be using the next four days to lay down what exactly I love and hate about the series, and what works and what does not.


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Ever since it first aired The Clone Wars has been a source of controversy among the Star Wars community. Everything from the writing, animation, and design was hotly debated and picked apart. For many, their first impression of the series was enough to scare them away. However, I managed to stick it through both seasons of the series. Through its highs and lows, I've stayed loyal to The Clone Wars, and for the most part it was worth it. Despite this, The Clone wars is not a perfect series. It has its problems, and many things I dislike. And before I begin my commentary on why the Clone Wars works, I must first examine why it does not. Here is my list of the top five things I hate about the Clone Wars.




5. Lack of Tension
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Perhaps one of the least obvious issues with the Clone Wars is something that plagues almost any story taking place before an established work. Going into the series the audience knows the fates of the majority of the main cast, which is unfortunate for a series that relies heavily on action and suspense. While it is interesting seeing characters grow and evolve into their ultimate shapes and mindsets, its uninteresting to see a lightsaber duel between Obiwan Kenobi and Count Dooku. We know that the fight will not end in any climactic results for either party, because the destinies of both are already known. It makes for awkward storytelling, and a frustrated viewer.



4. Uninticing Action
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An issue that has slowly been remedied by the current creative team are the sometimes bland action set pieces in The Clone Wars. Originally limited by a small budget and an inexperienced animation team, The Clone Wars sputtered along with providing unengaging and boring scenes. One aspect that was evident early on and continues to be a major issue for the show is that animated lightsaber battles, atleast done so in the manner portrayed in the Clone Wars, are just not fun to watch. While certain episodes such as Cloak of Darkness have done their best to add in some greatly choreographed scenes, watching animated models swing glowing lightsabers at one another will never be as exciting as watching real life actors and stunt doubles battle it out. Compound this with the lack of tension mentioned earlier, and one can imagine why watching Obiwan duel General Grievous for the fifth time in one season can grow boring.


3. Dialogue/Voice Acting
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An issue that has plagued Star Wars for the past decade has been unbearable dialogue. Most evident in Attack of the Clones, simple conversations can become nearly unwatchable due to unnatural writing and bland acting. Unfortunately, in many ways the Clone Wars follows this trend. While it has slowly improved with each passing episode, there are still several cringe worthy lines, particularly surrounding the romance driven subplots. The voice acting also has its moments worthy of disgust. Particularly surrounding Matt Latner's portrayal of Anakin Skywalker, a role that seems cursed to any actor. Also frustrating is the overly childish approach given to Ahsoka Thano by Ashley Eckstein, although once again this is an approach that has slowly been fixed as the show has progressed.

2. Humor
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The most frustrating aspect of the series at first glance is its repeated attempts at humor. Mostly portrayed through the bumbling villainous battle droids, these annoying pun and slap stick moments of attempted comic relief are more irritating then laugh inducing. In many instances incredibly dark or engaging moments will be ruined by a joke so uninspired and irritating that it can ruin whole episodes at a time. Two perfect examples can be seen in the season one installments "Defender's of Peace" and "The Blue Shadow Virus". Both episodes center around violent and dark themes including bioterrorism and death of innocents. However, any intelligent material is overwhelmed by poorly executed slapstick. Most unfortunate of all is the inclusion of Jar Jar Binks. Yes, arguably the worst character in the history of Star Wars does have a role in The Clone Wars (though thankfully its regulated to the first season.)

1. Retcons
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The most frustrating aspect of the Clone Wars as a Star Wars fan are the numerous retcons the series has created. Star Wars is a universe that has become infinitely expansive since its birth in 1977. Thanks to the contributions of the creative works behind video games, comics, and novels Star Wars had become a vibrant world filled with lore and creativity. This is why George Lucas's unappreciation and constant retconning of previously canon works is frustrating to numerous fans. Until the second season of the show the retcons had been a bearable grievance. However, this changed when Lucasfilm announced the numerous changes made to the beloved Mandalorian culture for a midseason arc. While this initially infuriating change was eventually revealed less far reaching then believed, this sudden change to a previously standing work was an unsettling move. With news breaking regarding season three, further retcons are to be expected. We can only cross our fingers and hope that further works are not ruined.


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Ultimately, I still have a great appreciation for The Clone Wars. While the series is still flawed, it increasingly gets better with each passing episode. Look for further commentaries later this week.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010


In 2008 former Marvel CEO and Spider-man film producer Avi Arad obtained the rights for a Mass Effect film. The idea is an interesting one to say the least. Could Bioware's epic space opera grace the silver screen? It is certainly an easy concept to visualise. Space battles, intense combat, indepth characters, and deep moral dilemas, Mass Effect has all the makings of a great sci-fi film. It even had scantily clad blue women before James Cameron did. But could it work? We have not heard much from the project outside the initial announcmenet, but buzz has picked up again with the release of Bioware's Mass Effect 2. There are many reasons why Mass Effect could work or not work as a film, reasons that will discussed in depth in the following.


Why it could work:


1. Epic Sci-fi

In many ways sci-fi has reached its golden age in cinema. Every year dozens of science fiction films are released under the guise of summer blockbusters and arthouse films. Last year saw the release of such huge science fiction hits as Star Trek, Moon, District 9, and Avatar. One could even consider the new Transformers atrocity a science fiction film. Mass Effect delivers some of the best sci-fi storytelling in any media in decades. It has the escapism and spectacle of Star Wars and Avatar, and the relevance and moral resonance of Star Trek and District 9. Mass Effect also delivers on the idea of heavy action sequences and creative set pieces that could easily be transitioned into a film.


2. Complex and Emotional Characters

The characters in the Mass Effect series are some of the most human and empathetic pixilated cast members of all time. From Garrus struggling with issues of loss and justice, to Wrex struggling to save his dying wardriven people, Mass Effect is filled with memorable characters that have been lacking form such sci-fi films as Avatar. The chemistry between the cast can easily be compared to JJ Abram's Star Trek reboot, which shined primarily due to its excellent casting and group dynamic.


3. Technology

CGI performances have begun to revolutionize what is possible in cinema. With such visionaries as Peter Jackson and James Cameron clearing the way for endless possibilities of digital acting, it is easily concievable that we could see a motion capture Asari or Salarian gracing the screen. The technology has also become cheaper and easier to reach following Avatar's release.


Why it wouldn't work


1. Video Game Movie Trackrecord

Video game movies are notorious for being awful. Whether it be the Mortal Combat or Street Fighter films, or even the Super Mario Bros. atrocity, there has yet to be a truly good video game film. Although it might be possible for Jerry Bruckheimer's (Pirates of the Caribbean) Prince of Persia to change that around, it is still a genre that has yet to be truly realized.


2. Difficulty of Adaptation

Perhaps one of the most obvious flaws in the idea of a Mass Effect film is the idea that each of the games in the series runs about thirty hours in length. Stripping this down to a two and half hour film could be a serious disservice to the characters, and the scale of the plot. Many of the moments that gave the game series its magic could and most likely would be lost in the transition.


3. Lack of Personal Input

The most dangerous prospect of taking on a Mass Effect film would be streamlining the story into one cohesive plot. What Mass Effect and arguably every Bioware game relies upon is player choices and input. Everything from the main characters design to who lives and dies is decided by the player. Commander Shepard could be a man or a woman, a hero or an antihero. A movie could only tell one of these stories, and by doing so could alienate much of the fanbase. It is possible that the movie could be based in the game universe but not involve the main plot, much similar to the Mass Effect book series, yet this would lose the significance of being a film based on the game. People want to see Shepard, but most of all they want to see THEIR Shepard.

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Whether a Mass Effect film is a good idea or not is an interesting debate, and an even more difficult gamble for Avi Arad and his team. There is as much potential for sucess as for failure. One things for sure though, Mass Effect has reached a level in story telling that is sure to attract much more attention as the series continues.
Saturday, October 10, 2009



The state of the Star Wars universe has long been a subject of debate for fans of George Lucas's sprawling space opera. The original trilogy considered to be among the best films of all time, have become tarnished by the less then stellar prequel trilogy. Though I and many other fans have a certain appreciation for the prequel saga, Episode III: Revenge of the Sith remains one of my favorite films. However, the increasing commercialism and critical slump of Star Wars has tarnished its once high reputation.

Star Wars fans continue to love their saga though, and Lucasfilm has seemed to find the right balance between pleasing their adult fans, with video games and novels, and their younger fanbase with toys. However, the biggest announcement in years of Star Wars fandom came during 2005, mere months before the prequel trilogy was to be concluded. Two Star Wars television series were in the works, one animated and one live-action. The announcement thundered through all of the nerd community.

The excitement was electric. Then came the first warning sign. The animated series was to be based upon the controversial prequel trilogy. The series was to chronicle the Clone Wars, the event that took place between Episodes II and III of the saga. This decision seemed odd to many fans. The Clone Wars was an area in the Star Wars chronology that had already been extensively covered, and the idea of creating a series upon the event seemed bizarre to say the least.

However, Lucas promised the fans that their worries were unfounded. He promised a high quality, action packed show that would rival the movies in quality. This quieted some of the anger, but many were still skeptical. This was the same man that had conceived of Jar Jar Binks after all. Then the first preview premiered, and the skepticism fell quiet once again. The animation was beautiful. The CGI provided for a great 3D feel that felt beyond that of any television series. The action, music, voice acting were all there and the show looked phenomenal. Faith was once again behind Lucas's newest baby.

Lucas couldn't keep his fans pleased for long though. Almost minutes after the jaw dropping first preview, another bizarre announcement was made. A new character was to be introduced to the series, Ahsoka Tano, and she was to be Anakin's Jedi Padawan. Fan's jaws dropped. A padawan!?! With Anakin!?! Fan's were outraged. What would happen to the continuity!?! What would be come of the years of story and work that the films, comics, and novels had built around Anakin!?! However, once again Lucas asked us to believe in him, a phrase that was slowly becoming a double edged sword.

Yet Lucas's greatest mistake was still to come. As 2008 opened, the Clone Wars animated series was to make a television debut that fall. Lucas's love for the series had grown great, and he felt that a show of this caliber deserved a better venue, the big screen. Dave Filoni, supervising director of the series, was shocked and hurriedly took his team together to try and splice together the first four episodes into one cohesive whole. The idea was doomed from the start. The Clone Wars were never fit for the big screen. The animation style though spectacular for a television series, was out of date and almost wooden in appearance when compared to the work of Pixar and Dreamworks. The characters were also seen as flat and uninteresting, the action as boring, and the writing a mess. Another common complaint about the movie was its use of bland and uninteresting humor, given by the villainous battle droid grunts. Their use of lame puns, and slapstick was seen as unnecessary and distracting. Overall, what might have worked on the small screen, was never fit for film. The act was almost as bad as forcing a talented child star to perform in competition with a group of trained professionals.

The fan view of the Clone Wars had slipped from excitement, to skepticism, to disdain. Thousands of older fans turned their backs on the series never to watch again. Many more became embarrassed that their once proud franchise had become children's fare. Despite the controversy, Filoni and Lucas decided to continue the series as scheduled, and on October 3rd 2008 the series premiered on Cartoon Network. At once some issues with the film were solved. The writing, animation, and action all worked much better in the scope of a half hour television show. Each episode worked easily as a cohesive whole.

However, one major problem remained with the fledgling series, and that was one with tone. The show, as stated by Lucas was written for both young and old fans in mind, but overall the series has had trouble finding its footing. The show featured many blatantly childlike areas, particularly the bland humor. It's focus on Ahsoka also made it feel as if the show was preaching towards a younger audience. The series also wanted an older audience as well. Death, and violence on the show were common, and often felt out of place. It seemed as if Filoni wanted to tell a story about war, but had trouble showing it on a program that supposedly favored a young audience. This was especially apparent in the shows' first major story arc revolving around a large battleship constructed by Seperatist leader General Grievous. The episodes featured many dark moments and themes such as loss, betrayal, and murder, but all these elements were undermined by the need to make the show appropriate to children. This dumbed down the action, and emotion to what would have otherwise been an amazing addition to the Star Wars mythos.

Then Clone Wars introduced the great game changer. An episode that would not only energized the fan base, but likely saved the series as well. Entitled “Rookies”, the episode followed a battalion of clones, who find themselves defending their outpost against an onslaught of droids. For the first time Clone Wars found its footing. Telling a mature, violent, humorous, and even emotionally wrenching story, “Rookies” proved that Filoni and the team could create not only true Star Wars material, but good stories overall. Energy had finally been pumped into a series that very much needed the love of its core fanbase.

The series would have several missteps and stumbles throughout its first season, but the series had found where it worked, and churned out such stellar episodes as: “Trespass”, “Lair of Grievous”, “Cloak of Darkness”, and “Storm Over Ryloth”. The show ended its first season on a positive note with the incredibly violent and dark “Hostage Crisis” ,following the invasion of the Republic Senate building by bounty hunter Cad Bane. The introduction of Bane marked a high in the series. This old school badass of a character has become an over night fan favorite, and smartly Filoni has made his role in the upcoming second season larger.

Overall, the Clone Wars has quickly jumped from being lackluster attempt at Star Wars to being a powerful and well produced show on its own. It has personally become one of my favorite shows, and the novelty of having quality Star Wars entertainment on a weekly basis is something that leads almost any nerd to pure electric excitement. The shows faults are still there: the writing can still stumble into corny cliches, the humor is still poor, and episodes can vary in quality ,yet these are small complaints. Expect to here more about the Clone Wars every week on Artificial Continuum.

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